i'am going into a state of thought to think of a way to finally conclude the story, which i have decided to call "Death to The World", so expect delay on the final parts

lol mine is a horror story FAIL!

um...

PART 15!!!!!!!!!!!! Squad 1 is up ~ they matierialized in the middle of a training room in the middle of a fighting session so they ended up with a hell of a lot of fight on their hands ~ they managed to defeat the dravidions who spotted them, but with the loss of 3 troops ~ Squad 1 signalled for Squad 2 to enter, and they spread out through the surrounding corridors and rooms, and kill all they meet ~ Squad 2 forms a defensive circle around the training room and Squad 1 signals for Squad 3 to enter ~ Squad 3 enters and join Squad 2s forces, expanding their defensive circle futher ~ a part Squad 3 runs into a troop of dravidions making their way to the training room and are forced to take combat positions ~ the dravidion and human teams both take serious casualties ~ the human time try to take out all the dravidions, but one gets away to alert the rest of the dravidions ~ Squad 1 makes an emergency call to Squad 4 so they get up even faster ~ Squad 4 gets up - and not a moment to soon as the alarms begin blaring ~ Squads 2 & 3 ready their weapons expecting dravidion solders to come charging at any moment ~ Squads 1 & 4 head to the power core room ~ Squads 2 & 3 are quickly attacked by dravidion troops and get a battle roaring ~ the battle is just the diversion Squads 1 & 4 need and they get to the power core room without much resistance ~ they enter the power core chamber and are greeted by a voice ~ Ah humans, i've been expecting you"
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

woooooow

Long story and its not even over yet. haha.

to be honest with you i don't know many scary stories all though i absolutly luv them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

amazing id watch haha

still thinking about wat to do for part 16

About my story don't read it cuz it's an intro to my manga and also the lyrics to beezle boss by Tenacious D...

to late i've read it

PART 16!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the final chapter) back in the corridors of the destroyer a battle is raging ~ Squads 2 & 3 called for heavy back up close to the beginning of the battle and gave the attacking dravidions a run for their money ~ both sides had suffered casualties but the dravidions were being fought back with relative ease ~ back in the power core room the lights had gone out and the only way of seeing anything was the eerie, pulsing glow of the power core ~ the voice had come from a dravidion, but he clearly wasn’t a soldier from the clothes he was wearing ~ Squads 1 & 4, worried began to back to back away, but before they could get out of the chamber a heavy door slammed shut behind them ~ the dravidion spoke “I am Emperor Regnorok of Dravidia, and you seem to be the human D.D.S team I’ve heard about” ~ the leader of Squad 1 replied “we are, and we are also intent on blowing your ship to smithereens” ~ Regnorok laughed at his comment and barked a single word in dravidion ~ several dravidions stepped out of the shadows, with some nasty looking laser cannons at their sides ~ they took aim at the troops and their fingers tightened on the triggers… ~ meanwhile the battle has spread to the control room of the destroyer, and the dravidions are defending it fiercely ~ Squads 2 & 3 are intent on taking the control room because they know if Squads 1 & 4 don’t manage to blow up the power core, there is a self-destruct mechanism in case of emergency ~ Squad 1 has done their job and defended Squad 4 with their life ~ Squad 4 know its up to them to kill the dravidions and destroy the ship ~ Regnorok laughs evilly and his guards take aim at Squad 4 ~ the laser beams let rip at Squad 4, who duck at the last moment ~ the lasers sail over their heads and destroy the door behind them ~ before the guards have a chance to recharge their weapons Squad 4 is out through the door and running to Squad 2 for help ~ Regnorok sends his guards after them, steps over the lifeless bodies of Squad 1, and heads calmly for escape pods ~ Squad 4 reaches the battle in the control room and requests help from Squad 2 ~ the leaders of Squad 2 & 4 agree its time for them to deploy their secret weapon ~ they contact H.Z.C.F.T and tell them to lock in onto their signal and send the H.A.C.S in, which stands for Heavily Armored Combat Suit, equipped with laser cannons, rocket launchers, sniper rifles and razor blades ~ H.Z.C.F.T agree, lock on to the signal, and teleport the H.A.C.S in ~ the H.A.C.S makes short work of the alien soldiers and launches a missile into the control room, to kill any dravidions inside ~ Squads 2,3 and 4 enter the control room cautiously and begin to think of a way to be able to defend the control room and search for the self-destruct button ~ Emperor Regnorok got to the escape pod bay and began powering up his private escape ship ~ Regnorok’s guards catch up with the D.D.S squads and open fire on the control room ~ the guards are greeted with a mini-missile, which blows 2 of the guards to bits ~ once the smoke and dust has cleared the H.A.C.S charges out at them and begins to fight ~ Squad 2 has discovered the self-destruct button and now that they have the H.A.C.S to escort Squad 4, Squad 4 thinks they can plant the bomb at the power core, and if all else fails, Squad 2 will press the self-destruct button ~ Emperor Regnorok begins the 1 minute countdown for his ship’s takeoff ~ Squad 4 plant the bomb at the power core and set the timer for 1 minute 30 seconds ~ Emperor Regnorok takes off from the destroyer with his best soldiers ~ Squad 4 contact Squads 2 & 3 and tells them to teleport back to earth ~ the D.D.S’s job is done, and as they teleport back to Earth, a huge explosion is heard all over the planet – the destroyer has been obliterated ~ the D.D.S is welcomed home and congratulated ~
No one spotted a small object falling through the atmosphere and crashing in the Amazon rainforest……

THE END!!!!!!!!!!

can someone comment on my story

Storm i would comment on the story, but i dont feel like reading a 5 page story all at once. sorry man.
Part 1 of 1!!!! lol jk Part 1 of maybe5
It was a dark stormy night on Maple Street, and there was only one house on Maple Street for some strange reason. Johnny was home alone and his parents were coming back home in 2 days from a buisness trip. He had been working on his 5 pg essay all night about horror films. He had to specifically describe each one he wrote about. He was almost done with it when he was struck by lightning(because the dumb@$$ was doing homework on the roof ROFL) He got knocked out. He awoke on his lawn to a chilling voice that said "Johhhnnnyyy. Wake up and pllllaaaaaaaayyy." He looked around to see where the voice came from, but no one was there....

I'll finish the rest later. i havae a crapload of homework to do

lol, its ok

i have the perfect story, cept im to busy to finish writing it

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finish the johnny story!!!!!!!!!!

Location: The Amazon Rainforest

The figure streaked through the forest like a knife through butter ~ he was running, running for his life and nothing was going to stop him ~ there were people chasing him, armed with guns ~ he heard a gun shot and dived as a bullet streaked past his head ~ he stopped for a moment and pondered what to do next ~ as the men closed in on him he jumped, straight into a tree, landing neatly on a branch ~ the people were directly beneath him now ~ they stopped for a moment, looked around, and carried on ~ the figure silently dropped down from the tree and began to pursue the men ~ he smiled to himself, the hunters had now become the hunted and he was about to take his first step towards revenge…
To Be Continued!!!!!

ok im continuing it
He went to open the door but it was locked. He had a puzzled look on his face as he went to peer through the window. And who would have known that the first thing he saw as he peered into the window, was Micheal Myers and Jason getting there freak on. He ran away throwing holy water on his eyes and went blind for a minute or so. As his eyes cleared up he was in front of the police station. "Perfect! Now i can get those two creepy bastards outa my house and get back to my story!" He walked in and there was no light at all, except the one on the front desk. There was a man wearinga stripped red shirt with a dusty old hat that covered his face. "Hello" said the man " This is 911 wats your emergency?" " Well theres these two guys buttf**king each other in my house." said johhny "Wat did they look like?" said the man quietly " They were both wearing white masks, and one of them had an abnormally large di "Wat!?!" yelled the man as he cut of johnnys sentence, "Those bastards were supposed to wait until my shift is over!!" The man stood up and left the station. "What the fu" Once again, Johnny was cut off. The lights turned out and all he could hear was the cries of children. He walked until he felt a light switch. He switched it on and could not believe wat he saw. TO BE CONTINUED!!

I LOVE MY STORIES

wat storys?

SOMEONE COMMENT ON MY NEW STORY!!!!!!!

Dude it's awesome, I haven't read it in a while so I had a lot of reading to do hehe

yea if only tht be kooo

your moms a horror story. THE END

come on more storys

In the fiery depths of Hell...One man ran in fear, fear of his own sins....In life he had murdered over 100,000 Jews....Then committed suicide in Austria near the end of WWII...."YOU CAN NOT ESCAPE YOUR PUNISHMENT ADOLF!"Satan cried as he cackled maniacally at the situation...
To be continued cuz I am more speciallized in writing Fantasy, Action, Adventure, Martial Arts stories...I suck at Horror stories

I'M GONNA START WRITING A NEW STORY!!!!!!!!!!
later

and charles hitler didn't commit suicide in austria, he did it in berlin, which is in GERMANY.

OKAY THEN STORM I DON'T CARE!

lol

This one is an action story




-Independence KY:10:25 P, 10/ 3 /10...."damn"Said Fox
TO BE CONT@

charles hitler killed over 6 million jews not 100,000 big difference

charles said hitler killed over 100,000 jews and know your saying he killed over six million jews so actually austin, ur just telling us the same thing but with a bigger figure

...Why the hell do you all care anyways?!?!?!?! POINT IS HITLER IS A SCUM BAG AND I'M PRETTY SURE HE'S SCARED SH.ITLESS BECAUSE HE'S PISSED HIS PANTS AND SH.IT HIS PANTS SO MUCH THAT HE CAN'T SH.IT AND PISS ANYMORE BECAUSE THE DEVIL IS TORTURING HIM! Jeez I don't really care...if you want me to be technical and not fun then fine! But you'll regret it

i can't get ze fu.cking trees DAMN I VILL KILL EVERYONE IN VE VORLD!!!!!!!!!!!

more horror storys please not u 2 fighting

Hey Storm that's Eddie Izzard-Dressed to Kill haha

hey, does any1 want to read mine?

Sure

title is prom dress, a jr. prom was coming up and shelly a 13 year old girl wanted a dress.so she asked her mom to give her money to look for a dress.so her mom gave her $20.Shelly went to the mall.she was window shopping until she saw a perfect dress in the display case and it was only $20 so she asked the lady to take it down from it.she bought the dress and ran home.prom night started in an hour.which is the exact same time she was ready and arived at the school.but then her friends reported she was not there turns out someone found her dead.turns out that dress was burried in a grave and some one dug it out.so it still remains a mystery but the real question is do u beleven????

that story made no sense ($50 and there broke?)

I thought it was ok, DarkBubble, but please use better grammer because I couldn't tell when a sentace started or ended.

u can't get a dress for $30 unless its the worst dress ever

A man walked into a bar. The End!

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U ARE A GOD AMONG WRITERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U NEED TO GET THAT PUBLISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U COULD BECOME RICH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS A MASTERPIECE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow.....thats a big story....lol

I hope storm, I hope.

lol

:)