THE DEVIL CHILD

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Cesar
Cesar
Level 21
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READ THIS even though i didnt make it but my best friend did and that best frien is cute joker
THE DEVIL CHILD

It was 1951 when the first devil child was born. The infant grew up as an orphan. It seemed that his mother died when the baby was 2 days old. But, she really was murdered by the devil. The devil would rape an innocent woman every 10 years and kill her after their first child is born.


On the child’s twelfth birthday, the devil would give his child evil powers. With these powers, the child would be impossible to beat. Unless, his father takes away his child’s powers. However, the devil will only do it if one heroic person overpowers the child. So far, no one has been brave enough to stop him. Now 2011 is coming. Soon the devil child would be 12 years old and all of us would be in horrible danger.








Tyler Clark slowly walked towards the front door of his house. He knew his mom would throw him a surprise birthday party, even if he doesn’t want one. The only reason Tyler doesn’t want a party is because his real mom isn’t there. His real mom died when he was 3 days old. Also, he never knew his dad either. He has been living in an adoption center until he was 7. Tyler always wished he could do something special and that wish is about to come true.


A boy like Tyler would always back down from whatever is happening. He doesn’t participate in any sports and he never talks in school. Some kids bully him all the time. Tyler would feel so small and worthless but he would never speak up and say what’s wrong.








“Soon, I will give Tyler his evil powers”, the devil laughed. Everyone will be begging for mercy. Hearing people cry is music to my ears.


The devil’s assistant looks up and whispers “I think you’re going too far”.


“Nonsense”! This year I will make my child’s powers twice as powerful and still, no one will try to stop him. I never have been gladder to see people suffer.








“Happy birthday, Tyler” said Tyler little sister.


“Thanks, Zoe.”


“What’s the matter?”


“Nothing is wrong, just forget about it.”


“Are you sure?”


“Yes.”


“Ok, bye.”


“Bye.”








The devil slowly creped in Tyler’s room. He looked down at his sleeping child with a huge smile.


“By tomorrow you will be an unstoppable to beat”, whispered the devil. Make me proud, son.


The next day, Tyler was feeling very weird. He still didn’t know he was the devil child.


When it turns 8:00 he will be the best killer around.








“Hey, loser”, said Aaron James as he pushed Tyler.


Aaron would always bully Tyler. Soon Tyler will obtain his revenge.





It was 8:00, and Tyler was going through his changes. His skin turned bright red and his teeth turned razor sharp. Small pointy horns stuck out of his head and his eyes turned black and bold. His fingernails were sharper than knives.


“Get ready to die, Aaron”, Tyler laughed and ran towards Aaron’s house
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Oooooh that'd be such a cliche if God or a child of God( WAIT WE ARE ALL HIS CHILDREN SO BASICALY THIS DUDE IS A CHILD OF GOD, THE ONE TO FIGHT THE DEVIL CHILD!)
never mind
good story
Good story.
Should be longer though.
i am going to tell a night time story tonight and my brother is going to sufer {evil laugh}
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King I'm going to dress up like Jigsaw and put you in a deathmachine in a glass box in times square*More evil laugh than King's evil laugh*WANNA PLAY A GAME?!?!?!?
wow thats a pretty cool story but like taylizcai said it needs to be longer
ya it does
yes i wanna play a game what game of yours were you thinking charles
Cesar
Cesar
Level 21
279 Posts
dont make fun of it i thought it was awesome and not just bcuz cute joker made but bcuz its probably better than watever u guys read
i read stuff thats a million times better than that i think its awesome i just would like it to be longer
Cesar
Cesar
Level 21
279 Posts
alright the oncoming storm but its not like a book that has chapters or anything
Cesar
Cesar
Level 21
279 Posts
i will tell her to write more if she can but if she cant than u r screwed
Loved it!
i wrote a book before. it was kicka$$
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Storm has written a horror Sci-fi on the Horror Stories forum
squid
squid
Level 17
98 Posts
awesome story
indeed charles: death ~ destruction ~ ARGH its a zombie ~ urgh urgh ~ *sucks brains out* ~ screams ~ runs ~ werewolf jumps out ~ horror ~ howls ~ werewolf tears guys to shred ~ 1 guy runs off and grabs an M16 machine gun ~ werewolf gets shot to death ~ zombie rips the machine out of his hands ~ infects him with a super virus that turns him into a walking zombie making machine ~ after a few seconds the entire city square is full of mad zombies ~ army arrives and take strategic positions around the zombies ~ army leaps out of cover and let their bullets rip through the zombies ~ but they discover that these zombies are special zombies- immune to all bullets!! ~ the zombies head for the commandos ~ the army finds itself trapped with zombies coming in from all sides!!! ~ TO BE CONTINUED



PART 2!!!!!!!! ~ the zombies leap forward and kill the commandos one by one ~ a few commandos escape and run for their helicopters ~ but when they get there they find more zombies tearing the choppers to shreds ~ the troops turn around and see the zombies pouring out of the city making straight for them ~ the commandos find themselves surrounded, again!!! ~ just in time a friendly helicopter spots them and lets down a ladder, the men are safe, for now ~ (a few days later) zombies have ravaged several countries- Japan, Great Britain, The United States of America, Brazil, South Africa, Spain and Central Asia ~ the zombies have taken control of Hawaii and turned it into an island fortress ~ the armies of the world are in tatters trying to stop the never-ending zombie hoard ~ Earth is doomed, or is it? ~ TO BE CONTINUED


PART 3!!!!!!! ~ the commandos who survived the first zombie assault where it all kicked off find themselves fighting against zombies in Venezuela, battling for control of the country ~ a freak storm takes both forces by surprise, causing a flash flood ~ the zombie team take this as an opportunity to take control, knowing that they can live underwater, unlike humans ~ the zombies plans backfire when lightning strikes the water surface, electrifying the zombies ~ the remaining zombies retreat to Brazil with large casualties ~ the humans have hope, they have won Venezuela and know have some more knowledge of the zombies, a weakness, LARGE AMOUNTS OF ELECTRICITY!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ with this intel the humans get to work making electric generators with the little resources they have left connecting them to cannons with large upgrades ~ they bring their brand new "Electric Cannons" in to battle for the first time ~ THEY WORK BRILLIANTLY!!!!! ~ the zombies forces are shattered as deadly bolts of electricity hit their ranks ~ the humans take back Brazil with the help of these brilliant weapons ~ the zombies are more wary of the humans now that they have the ECs and get their top brains working on a way to fight back ~ but little do both forces know that a greater threat is lying in wait, watching earth as it is ravaged by war.......... TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 4!!!!!!!! ~ now that the humans have mass produced the ECs, 8 counties have been taken back ~ the zombies rally their defenses hoping to bring the human march to a stand still ~ (a few days later) the human march has been brought to a stand still when the zombies discover a new metal, named "Discuscalatrus" it absorbs the electricity and turns it 100 times weaker before harmlessly releasing it into the air ~ the zombies quickly begin making body armor out of it, stopping the humans in the tracks and driving them slowly back ~ all the time someone watches the battle for Earth...... ~ however the zombies victory is short lived when the humans discover a common device which can destroy discuscalatrus, magnets! the magnetism has a very strong effect on the armor, pulling it off the zombies and exposing them to the electric bolts the zombies are pushed back, again! ~ while crossing a desert towards a zombie squad, 2 human spies come across something very strange, a tiled floor! just as they are about to cross it one of them cries "stop, don't move!" ~ TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!



PART 5!!!!!!! ~ the second spy begins to cross the tiles ignoring his friends warning ~ he instantly finds himself hanging off a large cliff face ~ I knew it was a trap cried the first spy ~ the second spy shouts help me you idiot! ~ just as he is about to help the second spy loses his grip and falls into the abyss ~ the floor closes up and the tiles disappear ~ the remaining spy continues with his mission ~ he finds the zombie squad, but not in a state they would normally be in, they are dead ~ the spy inspects each of the bodies but doesn't find a scratch on them ~ behind him something is rising out of the sand.... ~ he quickly swivels around but to late, he is dead before he hits the sand ~ the spies squad become worried when their spies don't return ~ before the leaders have a plan of action their camp comes under siege, but not by zombies, by something large and insect- like, something with large claws and razor sharp teeth, something ALIEN ~ the first alien in line speaks, "greetings foolish earthlings, we have watched your planet for centuries and have decided, now that you are ravaged and weak, the might of the Dravidions can take your planet with ease MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, oh and by the way, we come in peace"
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


PART 6!!!!!!!!!! ~ African command get anxious, they haven't had a report from their desert squad in days and can't pick up any life signs, human or zombie ~ British command comes under attack from zombies, a combination of ECs and magnets drive them back, but before they can repair their defenses, a Dravidion attack leaves their base in tatters and everyone dead ~ it’s the same story in Japan, China, The U.S and Brazil, zombies attack and then Dravidions take out what’s left, right after killing the retreating zombies ~ as no one lives to tell the tale of the alien menace, human and zombie forces are more confused than ever ~ (a few days later) Dravidions have intercepted all human satellites and make a world wide broadcast on the remaining TVs "people of earth, we come in peace however, most of you will not survive the oncoming invasion and those of you who do, will become our slaves, so to recap, we come in peace, but you are all going to die, have a nice day" ~ (worldwide panic) ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!


PART 7!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ a few hour after the broadcast the world is in panic as the Dravidions begin the invasion ~ zombies and humans alike are massacred as the Dravidions sweep through countries, destroying everything in their path ~ at the Polish border the Dravidions are having quite a hard time trying to get through the defenses ~ the Dravidions retreat after a rather short struggle ~ the humans see this as a sign of victory, but soon after the base is blown to pieces, however there are no zombies or aliens near by ~ human bases and zombie bases are mysteriously blown up in the same way soon after the Polish assault ~ British intelligence pick up something asteroid sized orbiting the planet ~ it is believed to be a large Dravidion craft and several nukes are targeted to blow it out of the sky ~ a few minutes before the launch an energy wave is detected leaving the ship, heading for British intelligence and the silos ~ just as they are about to launch, the silos are ripped to pieces by concentrated energy bolts and British intelligence is destroyed in the same way ~ the energy wave also triggers a nuclear reaction across the whole of Britain, leaving it lifeless ~ the top zombie leaders and the President of The U.S, The British Prime Minister and other world leaders meet together for the first ever time to discuss and alliance and a way to destroy the Dravidions ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the meeting ended with an allegiance, the zombies and humans combined may now have hope ~ dravidions have heard of the human/zombie truce but have no fear as they think nothing can stop them destroying earth ~ SUCCESS!!!!!!!! an ambush on a dravidion convoy of troop carriers and hover tanks ended with the first victory for H.Z.C.F.T, Human and Zombie Combined Forces Team, the convoy was traveling through a large rocky valley when they where ambushed from all sides by a large zombie hord, who ripped through the dravidion armor and as the zombies swarmed in through the cracks, human sniper teams on the surrounding hills took out any fleeing aliens with headshots ~ as the zombies spilled out again EC cannons targeted the ruined convoy and opened fire making sure no aliens survived ~ after hearing of the H.Z.C.F.T's victory dravidions see that H.Z.C.F.T must be destroyed or they may suffer more losses ~ energy rays are detected heading to all major cities ~ one by one the cities are devastated ~ H.Z.C.F.T see this was an attack with a message "you may have had some major victories but we still can destroy your cities at will" ~ H.Z.C.F.T decide enough is enough and something must be done about the giant space cannon ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Part 9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a special ground to space cannon is being designed and built in a secret Siberian war factory by H.Z.C.F.T ~ dravidions have no idea what’s going on ~ the cannon is specially designed to harvest something called "Energon", a unique energy that comes from emeralds mixed with quartz pushed together by strong magnetic forces ~ then the cannon absorbs the energon, pushing electricity, fire and ice into the energon, then the combo is released out of a specially modified barrel into space, and completely obliterates anything in its way, that’s the idea anyway ~ dravidions have finally heard reports of this cannon and become worried as this is the same energy combo they use for their own energy cannon ~ dravidions think there is a spy in their mothership who is telling H.Z.C.F.T about their
advancements in weaponry ~ dravidion generals order a clean sweep of the entire ship ~ a human spy is found and interrogated aboard the mothership ~ he tells them nothing so they throw him out into deep space ~ the dravidions have located the secret war factory and power up their cannon, just as H.Z.C.F.T begin powering up their newly finished cannon ~ both cannons fire and as the beams streak towards each other....
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ the beams meet and begin a power battle, with each cannon funneling more power into their beam ~ the beams meeting place is being pushed back towards the war factory, as the dravidion cannon is the more powerful ~ just as the dravidion beam is about to hit home, the battle cruiser is sent into oblivion by several nuclear time bombs left by the spy before he was captured ~ news of the mothership’s obliteration spreads quickly across Earth (as does falling debris) the dravidion morale shattered, the spirits of zombies and humans raised ~ the dravidions lose many battles as their troop supply has been shortened and their technology salvaged and copied by humans and, most of all, their fighting spirits destroyed ~ the dravidions flee Earth and head to the moon to create a base and consider their options - flee, attack, surrender or attempt to make a truce ~ however many of the ships are taken down heading for the moon and the dravidions think the last option is out of the question ~ the dravidions simply don't know what to do
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


PART 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H.Z.C.F.T begin preparing a battle fleet to go up to the moon and destroy the remnants of the dravidion invasion force ~ dravidions begin making anti-air cannons in case H.Z.C.F.T attack, however they are a bit makeshift as the resources are down ~ H.Z.C.F.T finish designing battle fleet, and move on to building the fleet ~ dravidions send out a portion of their number to get help from their homeworld, Dravidia, they know if they send out too many ships, they will be detected by H.Z.C.F.T and shot down by ground to space cannons ~ (A FEW MONTHS LATER) building of battle fleet finishes and testing begins ~ (meanwhile) DRAVIDIA - homeworld of the Dravidions ~ a new invasion force begins instant preparation of all available dravidion battle cruisers once the dravidion emperor - Emperor Regnorok - hears of the defeat ~ top dravidion strategists and generals get together to draw up battle plans ~ testing of H.Z.C.F.T battle fleet done and dusted, all craft are set to launch ~ dravidion battle plans done, battle fleet is in the air and streaking towards earth, bent on revenge ~ H.Z.C.F.T detect the dravidion battle fleet before they have even entered the solar system and divert their own fleet to engage ~ both fleets streak towards each other and as the first shots are fired, H.Z.C.F.T and Dravidia alike will know this battle will go down in history...
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ (a few hours later) the battle is raging and several battle cruisers are in flames ~ Emperor Regnorok is coming to join the battle in his private destroyer ~dravidion battle cruisers vastly outnumber H.Z.C.F.T's force of battle cruisers, but H.Z.C.F.T have greater weaponry capabilities and a much larger hulk, this becomes a problem for H.Z.C.F.T as the dravidions spilt up and begin operating like a pack ~ each group of fast and nimble dravidion battle cruisers speed after the large bodies of human craft, surround them, fire several shots to disable the cruiser, board and kill the crew, leave to their own ships, and fire several more shots to send the human battle cruiser up in flames ~ Regnorok arrives in a absolutely HUGE destroyer ship, and blows up most of the human fleet ~ humans know they will lose unless they target Regnorok's destroyer and send it to oblivion ~ this they attempt to do but with several being picked off by dravidion spaceships and the destroyer's long-range cannons, only a small amount manage to get the destroyer in range ~ those who do decide enough is enough and concentrate all their firepower on the deadly destroyer....
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 13!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ the human fire hits the destroyer... and has zero effect ~ the destroyer blasts down several more cruisers and rams another two, destroying them ~ the 3 H.Z.C.F.T ships that are left flee at maximum speed back to earth, but one is intercepted and destroyed ~ dravidions battle cruisers daren't go near earth for fear of ground to space cannons ~ the destroyer's crew is more brave as they have energy shields, heavy armor and huge cannons that dwarf most H.Z.C.F.T cannons ~ H.Z.C.F.T open fire on the destroyer ~ H.Z.C.F.T's guns are more powerful than the dravidions thought and their energy shield struggles against the human firepower ~ after destroying several cannons the destroyer's shield gives way and the craft is open to fire ~ after several areas blow up, the destroyer flies out of range of H.Z.C.F.T and begins pondering the next move ~ H.Z.C.F.T get to work repairing the damaged cannons ~ while H.Z.C.F.T is busy Regnorok orders the smaller battle cruisers to attack, but seeing what the cannons can do to the destroyer, they flee and leave the destroyer alone ~ on earth H.Z.C.F.T have studied the scans of the destroyer and come to a conclusion - the destroyer can only be destroyed... from the inside ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 14!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ a special set of squads is being trained by H.Z.C.F.T to infiltrate the destroyer and destroy it ~ special teleportation pods are being designed to send the D.D.S (Death to the Dravidions Squad) into the destroyer to destroy it ~ OPERATION OBLIVION: STEP 1: Squad 1 will get in and kill all dravidions in sight STEP 2: squad 1 will then signal for Squad 2 come in who will split up and spread out into the surrounding area, kill all dravidions they meet and form a defensive circle around Squad 1 STEP 3: Squad 3 will enter and spilt up and escort the troops in Squad 2 farther out into the ship, expanding the defensive circle STEP 4: Squad 4, the bomb team, will enter and squad 1 will guard them as they go even further in to the ship STEP 5: dravidion alarms should've sounded by now, at which point Squads 2 & 3 will move out into the ship and begin a full scale assault but they will be acting as a decoy to attract dravidion attention while Squads 1 and 4 lay the bomb at the power core of the destroyer, which holds a lot of highly explosive energy, when detonation happens it would be 1000 times more powerful than a nuclear bomb ~ the D.D.S's training has been complete, and OPERATION OBLIVION is go...
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 15!!!!!!!!!!!! Squad 1 is up ~ they materialized in the middle of a training room in the middle of a fighting session so they ended up with a heck of a lot of fight on their hands ~ they managed to defeat the dravidions who spotted them, but with the loss of 3 troops ~ Squad 1 signaled for Squad 2 to enter, and they spread out through the surrounding corridors and rooms, and kill all they meet ~ Squad 2 forms a defensive circle around the training room and Squad 1 signals for Squad 3 to enter ~ Squad 3 enters and join Squad 2s forces, expanding their defensive circle further ~ a part Squad 3 runs into a troop of dravidions making their way to the training room and are forced to take combat positions ~ the dravidion and human teams both take serious casualties ~ the human team try to take out all the dravidions, but one gets away to alert the rest of the dravidions ~ Squad 1 makes an emergency call to Squad 4 so they get up even faster ~ Squad 4 gets up - and not a moment to soon as the alarms begin blaring ~ Squads 2 & 3 ready their weapons expecting dravidion solders to come charging at any moment ~ Squads 1 & 4 head to the power core room ~ Squads 2 & 3 are quickly attacked by dravidion troops and get a battle roaring ~ the battle is just the diversion Squads 1 & 4 need and they get to the power core room without much resistance ~ they enter the power core chamber and are greeted by a voice ~ “Ah humans, I’ve been expecting you"
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 16!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the final chapter) back in the corridors of the destroyer a battle is raging ~ Squads 2 & 3 called for heavy back up close to the beginning of the battle and gave the attacking dravidions a run for their money ~ both sides had suffered casualties but the dravidions were being fought back with relative ease ~ back in the power core room the lights had gone out and the only way of seeing anything was the eerie, pulsing glow of the power core ~ the voice had come from a dravidion, but he clearly wasn’t a soldier from the clothes he was wearing ~ Squads 1 & 4, worried began to back to back away, but before they could get out of the chamber a heavy door slammed shut behind them ~ the dravidion spoke “I am Emperor Regnorok of Dravidia, and you seem to be the human D.D.S team I’ve heard about” ~ the leader of Squad 1 replied “we are, and we are also intent on blowing your ship to smithereens” ~ Regnorok laughed at his comment and barked a single word in dravidion ~ several dravidions stepped out of the shadows, with some nasty looking laser cannons at their sides ~ they took aim at the troops and their fingers tightened on the triggers… ~ meanwhile the battle has spread to the control room of the destroyer, and the dravidions are defending it fiercely ~ Squads 2 & 3 are intent on taking the control room because they know if Squads 1 & 4 don’t manage to blow up the power core, there is a self-destruct mechanism in case of emergency ~ Squad 1 has done their job and defended Squad 4 with their life ~ Squad 4 know its up to them to kill the dravidions and destroy the ship ~ Regnorok laughs evilly and his guards take aim at Squad 4 ~ the laser beams let rip at Squad 4, who duck at the last moment ~ the lasers sail over their heads and destroy the door behind them ~ before the guards have a chance to recharge their weapons Squad 4 is out through the door and running to Squad 2 for help ~ Regnorok sends his guards after them, steps over the lifeless bodies of Squad 1, and heads calmly for escape pods ~ Squad 4 reaches the battle in the control room and requests help from Squad 2 ~ the leaders of Squad 2 & 4 agree its time for them to deploy their secret weapon ~ they contact H.Z.C.F.T and tell them to lock in onto their signal and send the H.A.C.S in, which stands for Heavily Armored Combat Suit, equipped with laser cannons, rocket launchers, sniper rifles and razor blades ~ H.Z.C.F.T agree, lock on to the signal, and teleport the H.A.C.S in ~ the H.A.C.S makes short work of the alien soldiers and launches a missile into the control room, to kill any dravidions inside ~ Squads 2,3 and 4 enter the control room cautiously and begin to think of a way to be able to defend the control room and search for the self-destruct button ~ Emperor Regnorok got to the escape pod bay and began powering up his private escape ship ~ Regnorok’s guards catch up with the D.D.S squads and open fire on the control room ~ the guards are greeted with a mini-missile, which blows 2 of the guards to bits ~ once the smoke and dust has cleared the H.A.C.S charges out at them and begins to fight ~ Squad 2 has discovered the self-destruct button and now that they have the H.A.C.S to escort Squad 4, Squad 4 thinks they can plant the bomb at the power core, and if all else fails, Squad 2 will press the self-destruct button ~ Emperor Regnorok begins the 1 minute countdown for his ship’s takeoff ~ Squad 4 plant the bomb at the power core and set the timer for 1 minute 30 seconds ~ Emperor Regnorok takes off from the destroyer with his best soldiers ~ Squad 4 contact Squads 2 & 3 and tells them to teleport back to earth ~ the D.D.S’s job is done, and as they teleport back to Earth, a huge explosion is heard all over the planet – the destroyer has been obliterated ~ the D.D.S is welcomed home and congratulated ~
No one spotted a small object falling through the atmosphere and crashing in the Amazon rainforest……

SUCK ON THAT BEOTCH
Way to show him? hahaha.
TO RIGHT!!!!!!!!!
ya think ya went a little over board on tht oncoming storm?sorry but i didn't bother to read it bcuz it was to long sorry but the devil story was AWESOME
I?!?!?!?! THE ONCOMING STORM!!!!!!!!!!!!! OVERBOARD!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND MY STORY DWARFS ALL OTHER STORIES ON THIS SITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like both stories.
His and Hers.
I like my unfinished story better
thank you 2 everybody who liked my story, i will try 2 make it longer
u mean ur johnny story pete?
tHAT IS A GOOD STORY
which story?
my Johnny Story
Good Story!
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Uuuuh storm....Please tell me you copied and pasted that story...
yes
Dan
Dan
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storm: meh, ive read better
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Hahaha