I figured this could be like the horror story forum, but not only limited to horror stories. If u wrote something or if you found a story u really liked write it down and post it here.(poems,skits,quotes,or any other literature too!!) Then u might get some feedback on it.:)

Okay, this one I wrote a bit ago. FYI; Hestia is the greek goddess of the hearth and home. I figured I would share it. Comment and rate...

The Presence of Home

The songs were over but something kept me from going to my cabin. I'm not sure what it was at first.
A presence? Maybe.
I could sense it. There was warm feeling of a mother's embrace. The sweet scent of freshly baked cookies. The mild hum of a TV in a room. The rich taste on my tongue of hot cocoa right out of the kettle. What was this feeling? It felt so familiar, yet I couldn't put my finger on it.
Coming out of my dazed, I looked around the circle of log seats and realized everyone but a chestnut-colored hair girl and I, were gone. I was so deeply concentrating on my new-yet-familiar feelings that I didn't notice all the rest of the campers head to their cabins.
*Sizzle, crack*I glanced over at the last remaining girl who was poking at the dim fire of tonight’s activities, with a soot-ended stick. The fire should have burnt out by now or at most have a few soul- surviving glowing ashes. But the way she looked at the wavering fire seemed to give it energy to live.
I focused on her amber eyes as she watched the fire. I could see the flames reflection in them...but wait. It seemed as though the fire was actually in her eyes, as if that is where it was originating from!
She turned her head so that her curious eyes burned into my ogling ones. I quickly shifted my view back to the flames. I slowly sank back into my earlier feeling as I gazed forward.
" Wonderful isn't it? The feel of home that comes from far away places like a campfire. Even after all my years, the fire of a hearth never fails to deliver that feeling." Her voice sounded very wise, but full of comfort, worry, and reassurance. Somehow, it made me remember my mother. Oh, I missed her so much. Slowly, I started to feel homesick creep in.
That was the feeling that was I was experiancing the whole time. Homesickness. I looked back at the girl next to me and in an instant I knew who she was.
" I do agree, it is quite wonderful. Thank you, Lady Hestia!"

here is a poem i made up, i hope u like it

don't cry, don't kick the ground, just make a wish, then turn around, next get back up, and believe in yourself, be the real you and no one else

9/10 Very good, nice rhyming!

thanks

shall i post my horror/sci-fi?

sure watever u want

I write a little myself

post it!

death ~ destruction ~ ARGH its a zombie ~ urgh urgh ~ *sucks brains out* ~ screams ~ runs ~ werewolf jumps out ~ horror ~ howls ~ werewolf tears guys to shred ~ 1 guy runs off and grabs an M16 machine gun ~ werewolf gets shot to death ~ zombie rips the machine out of his hands ~ infects him with a super virus that turns him into a walking zombie making machine ~ after a few seconds the entire city square is full of mad zombies ~ army arrives and take strategic positions around the zombies ~ army leaps out of cover and let their bullets rip through the zombies ~ but they discover that these zombies are special zombies- immune to all bullets!! ~ the zombies head for the commandos ~ the army finds itself trapped with zombies coming in from all sides!!! ~ TO BE CONTINUED



PART 2!!!!!!!! ~ the zombies leap forward and kill the commandos one by one ~ a few commandos escape and run for their helicopters ~ but when they get there they find more zombies tearing the choppers to shreds ~ the troops turn around and see the zombies pouring out of the city making straight for them ~ the commandos find themselves surrounded, again!!! ~ just in time a friendly helicopter spots them and lets down a ladder, the men are safe, for now ~ (a few days later) zombies have ravaged several countries- Japan, Great Britain, The United States of America, Brazil, South Africa, Spain and Central Asia ~ the zombies have taken control of Hawaii and turned it into an island fortress ~ the armies of the world are in tatters trying to stop the never-ending zombie hoard ~ Earth is doomed, or is it? ~ TO BE CONTINUED


PART 3!!!!!!! ~ the commandos who survived the first zombie assault where it all kicked off find themselves fighting against zombies in Venezuela, battling for control of the country ~ a freak storm takes both forces by surprise, causing a flash flood ~ the zombie team take this as an opportunity to take control, knowing that they can live underwater, unlike humans ~ the zombies plans backfire when lightning strikes the water surface, electrifying the zombies ~ the remaining zombies retreat to Brazil with large casualties ~ the humans have hope, they have won Venezuela and know have some more knowledge of the zombies, a weakness, LARGE AMOUNTS OF ELECTRICITY!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ with this intel the humans get to work making electric generators with the little resources they have left connecting them to cannons with large upgrades ~ they bring their brand new "Electric Cannons" in to battle for the first time ~ THEY WORK BRILLIANTLY!!!!! ~ the zombies forces are shattered as deadly bolts of electricity hit their ranks ~ the humans take back Brazil with the help of these brilliant weapons ~ the zombies are more wary of the humans now that they have the ECs and get their top brains working on a way to fight back ~ but little do both forces know that a greater threat is lying in wait, watching earth as it is ravaged by war.......... TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 4!!!!!!!! ~ now that the humans have mass produced the ECs, 8 counties have been taken back ~ the zombies rally their defenses hoping to bring the human march to a stand still ~ (a few days later) the human march has been brought to a stand still when the zombies discover a new metal, named "Discuscalatrus" it absorbs the electricity and turns it 100 times weaker before harmlessly releasing it into the air ~ the zombies quickly begin making body armor out of it, stopping the humans in the tracks and driving them slowly back ~ all the time someone watches the battle for Earth...... ~ however the zombies victory is short lived when the humans discover a common device which can destroy discuscalatrus, magnets! the magnetism has a very strong effect on the armor, pulling it off the zombies and exposing them to the electric bolts the zombies are pushed back, again! ~ while crossing a desert towards a zombie squad, 2 human spies come across something very strange, a tiled floor! just as they are about to cross it one of them cries "stop, don't move!" ~ TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!



PART 5!!!!!!! ~ the second spy begins to cross the tiles ignoring his friends warning ~ he instantly finds himself hanging off a large cliff face ~ I knew it was a trap cried the first spy ~ the second spy shouts help me you idiot! ~ just as he is about to help the second spy loses his grip and falls into the abyss ~ the floor closes up and the tiles disappear ~ the remaining spy continues with his mission ~ he finds the zombie squad, but not in a state they would normally be in, they are dead ~ the spy inspects each of the bodies but doesn't find a scratch on them ~ behind him something is rising out of the sand.... ~ he quickly swivels around but to late, he is dead before he hits the sand ~ the spies squad become worried when their spies don't return ~ before the leaders have a plan of action their camp comes under siege, but not by zombies, by something large and insect- like, something with large claws and razor sharp teeth, something ALIEN ~ the first alien in line speaks, "greetings foolish earthlings, we have watched your planet for centuries and have decided, now that you are ravaged and weak, the might of the Dravidions can take your planet with ease MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, oh and by the way, we come in peace"
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


PART 6!!!!!!!!!! ~ African command get anxious, they haven't had a report from their desert squad in days and can't pick up any life signs, human or zombie ~ British command comes under attack from zombies, a combination of ECs and magnets drive them back, but before they can repair their defenses, a Dravidion attack leaves their base in tatters and everyone dead ~ it’s the same story in Japan, China, The U.S and Brazil, zombies attack and then Dravidions take out what’s left, right after killing the retreating zombies ~ as no one lives to tell the tale of the alien menace, human and zombie forces are more confused than ever ~ (a few days later) Dravidions have intercepted all human satellites and make a world wide broadcast on the remaining TVs "people of earth, we come in peace however, most of you will not survive the oncoming invasion and those of you who do, will become our slaves, so to recap, we come in peace, but you are all going to die, have a nice day" ~ (worldwide panic) ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!


PART 7!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ a few hour after the broadcast the world is in panic as the Dravidions begin the invasion ~ zombies and humans alike are massacred as the Dravidions sweep through countries, destroying everything in their path ~ at the Polish border the Dravidions are having quite a hard time trying to get through the defenses ~ the Dravidions retreat after a rather short struggle ~ the humans see this as a sign of victory, but soon after the base is blown to pieces, however there are no zombies or aliens near by ~ human bases and zombie bases are mysteriously blown up in the same way soon after the Polish assault ~ British intelligence pick up something asteroid sized orbiting the planet ~ it is believed to be a large Dravidion craft and several nukes are targeted to blow it out of the sky ~ a few minutes before the launch an energy wave is detected leaving the ship, heading for British intelligence and the silos ~ just as they are about to launch, the silos are ripped to pieces by concentrated energy bolts and British intelligence is destroyed in the same way ~ the energy wave also triggers a nuclear reaction across the whole of Britain, leaving it lifeless ~ the top zombie leaders and the President of The U.S, The British Prime Minister and other world leaders meet together for the first ever time to discuss and alliance and a way to destroy the Dravidions ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the meeting ended with an allegiance, the zombies and humans combined may now have hope ~ dravidions have heard of the human/zombie truce but have no fear as they think nothing can stop them destroying earth ~ SUCCESS!!!!!!!! an ambush on a dravidion convoy of troop carriers and hover tanks ended with the first victory for H.Z.C.F.T, Human and Zombie Combined Forces Team, the convoy was traveling through a large rocky valley when they where ambushed from all sides by a large zombie hord, who ripped through the dravidion armor and as the zombies swarmed in through the cracks, human sniper teams on the surrounding hills took out any fleeing aliens with headshots ~ as the zombies spilled out again EC cannons targeted the ruined convoy and opened fire making sure no aliens survived ~ after hearing of the H.Z.C.F.T's victory dravidions see that H.Z.C.F.T must be destroyed or they may suffer more losses ~ energy rays are detected heading to all major cities ~ one by one the cities are devastated ~ H.Z.C.F.T see this was an attack with a message "you may have had some major victories but we still can destroy your cities at will" ~ H.Z.C.F.T decide enough is enough and something must be done about the giant space cannon ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Part 9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a special ground to space cannon is being designed and built in a secret Siberian war factory by H.Z.C.F.T ~ dravidions have no idea what’s going on ~ the cannon is specially designed to harvest something called "Energon", a unique energy that comes from emeralds mixed with quartz pushed together by strong magnetic forces ~ then the cannon absorbs the energon, pushing electricity, fire and ice into the energon, then the combo is released out of a specially modified barrel into space, and completely obliterates anything in its way, that’s the idea anyway ~ dravidions have finally heard reports of this cannon and become worried as this is the same energy combo they use for their own energy cannon ~ dravidions think there is a spy in their mothership who is telling H.Z.C.F.T about their
advancements in weaponry ~ dravidion generals order a clean sweep of the entire ship ~ a human spy is found and interrogated aboard the mothership ~ he tells them nothing so they throw him out into deep space ~ the dravidions have located the secret war factory and power up their cannon, just as H.Z.C.F.T begin powering up their newly finished cannon ~ both cannons fire and as the beams streak towards each other....
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ the beams meet and begin a power battle, with each cannon funneling more power into their beam ~ the beams meeting place is being pushed back towards the war factory, as the dravidion cannon is the more powerful ~ just as the dravidion beam is about to hit home, the battle cruiser is sent into oblivion by several nuclear time bombs left by the spy before he was captured ~ news of the mothership’s obliteration spreads quickly across Earth (as does falling debris) the dravidion morale shattered, the spirits of zombies and humans raised ~ the dravidions lose many battles as their troop supply has been shortened and their technology salvaged and copied by humans and, most of all, their fighting spirits destroyed ~ the dravidions flee Earth and head to the moon to create a base and consider their options - flee, attack, surrender or attempt to make a truce ~ however many of the ships are taken down heading for the moon and the dravidions think the last option is out of the question ~ the dravidions simply don't know what to do
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


PART 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H.Z.C.F.T begin preparing a battle fleet to go up to the moon and destroy the remnants of the dravidion invasion force ~ dravidions begin making anti-air cannons in case H.Z.C.F.T attack, however they are a bit makeshift as the resources are down ~ H.Z.C.F.T finish designing battle fleet, and move on to building the fleet ~ dravidions send out a portion of their number to get help from their homeworld, Dravidia, they know if they send out too many ships, they will be detected by H.Z.C.F.T and shot down by ground to space cannons ~ (A FEW MONTHS LATER) building of battle fleet finishes and testing begins ~ (meanwhile) DRAVIDIA - homeworld of the Dravidions ~ a new invasion force begins instant preparation of all available dravidion battle cruisers once the dravidion emperor - Emperor Regnorok - hears of the defeat ~ top dravidion strategists and generals get together to draw up battle plans ~ testing of H.Z.C.F.T battle fleet done and dusted, all craft are set to launch ~ dravidion battle plans done, battle fleet is in the air and streaking towards earth, bent on revenge ~ H.Z.C.F.T detect the dravidion battle fleet before they have even entered the solar system and divert their own fleet to engage ~ both fleets streak towards each other and as the first shots are fired, H.Z.C.F.T and Dravidia alike will know this battle will go down in history...
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ (a few hours later) the battle is raging and several battle cruisers are in flames ~ Emperor Regnorok is coming to join the battle in his private destroyer ~dravidion battle cruisers vastly outnumber H.Z.C.F.T's force of battle cruisers, but H.Z.C.F.T have greater weaponry capabilities and a much larger hulk, this becomes a problem for H.Z.C.F.T as the dravidions spilt up and begin operating like a pack ~ each group of fast and nimble dravidion battle cruisers speed after the large bodies of human craft, surround them, fire several shots to disable the cruiser, board and kill the crew, leave to their own ships, and fire several more shots to send the human battle cruiser up in flames ~ Regnorok arrives in a absolutely HUGE destroyer ship, and blows up most of the human fleet ~ humans know they will lose unless they target Regnorok's destroyer and send it to oblivion ~ this they attempt to do but with several being picked off by dravidion spaceships and the destroyer's long-range cannons, only a small amount manage to get the destroyer in range ~ those who do decide enough is enough and concentrate all their firepower on the deadly destroyer....
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 13!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ the human fire hits the destroyer... and has zero effect ~ the destroyer blasts down several more cruisers and rams another two, destroying them ~ the 3 H.Z.C.F.T ships that are left flee at maximum speed back to earth, but one is intercepted and destroyed ~ dravidions battle cruisers daren't go near earth for fear of ground to space cannons ~ the destroyer's crew is more brave as they have energy shields, heavy armor and huge cannons that dwarf most H.Z.C.F.T cannons ~ H.Z.C.F.T open fire on the destroyer ~ H.Z.C.F.T's guns are more powerful than the dravidions thought and their energy shield struggles against the human firepower ~ after destroying several cannons the destroyer's shield gives way and the craft is open to fire ~ after several areas blow up, the destroyer flies out of range of H.Z.C.F.T and begins pondering the next move ~ H.Z.C.F.T get to work repairing the damaged cannons ~ while H.Z.C.F.T is busy Regnorok orders the smaller battle cruisers to attack, but seeing what the cannons can do to the destroyer, they flee and leave the destroyer alone ~ on earth H.Z.C.F.T have studied the scans of the destroyer and come to a conclusion - the destroyer can only be destroyed... from the inside ~
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 14!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ a special set of squads is being trained by H.Z.C.F.T to infiltrate the destroyer and destroy it ~ special teleportation pods are being designed to send the D.D.S (Death to the Dravidions Squad) into the destroyer to destroy it ~ OPERATION OBLIVION: STEP 1: Squad 1 will get in and kill all dravidions in sight STEP 2: squad 1 will then signal for Squad 2 come in who will split up and spread out into the surrounding area, kill all dravidions they meet and form a defensive circle around Squad 1 STEP 3: Squad 3 will enter and spilt up and escort the troops in Squad 2 farther out into the ship, expanding the defensive circle STEP 4: Squad 4, the bomb team, will enter and squad 1 will guard them as they go even further in to the ship STEP 5: dravidion alarms should've sounded by now, at which point Squads 2 & 3 will move out into the ship and begin a full scale assault but they will be acting as a decoy to attract dravidion attention while Squads 1 and 4 lay the bomb at the power core of the destroyer, which holds a lot of highly explosive energy, when detonation happens it would be 1000 times more powerful than a nuclear bomb ~ the D.D.S's training has been complete, and OPERATION OBLIVION is go...
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PART 15!!!!!!!!!!!! Squad 1 is up ~ they materialized in the middle of a training room in the middle of a fighting session so they ended up with a heck of a lot of fight on their hands ~ they managed to defeat the dravidions who spotted them, but with the loss of 3 troops ~ Squad 1 signaled for Squad 2 to enter, and they spread out through the surrounding corridors and rooms, and kill all they meet ~ Squad 2 forms a defensive circle around the training room and Squad 1 signals for Squad 3 to enter ~ Squad 3 enters and join Squad 2s forces, expanding their defensive circle further ~ a part Squad 3 runs into a troop of dravidions making their way to the training room and are forced to take combat positions ~ the dravidion and human teams both take serious casualties ~ the human team try to take out all the dravidions, but one gets away to alert the rest of the dravidions ~ Squad 1 makes an emergency call to Squad 4 so they get up even faster ~ Squad 4 gets up - and not a moment to soon as the alarms begin blaring ~ Squads 2 & 3 ready their weapons expecting dravidion solders to come charging at any moment ~ Squads 1 & 4 head to the power core room ~ Squads 2 & 3 are quickly attacked by dravidion troops and get a battle roaring ~ the battle is just the diversion Squads 1 & 4 need and they get to the power core room without much resistance ~ they enter the power core chamber and are greeted by a voice ~ “Ah humans, I’ve been expecting you"
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 16!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the final chapter) back in the corridors of the destroyer a battle is raging ~ Squads 2 & 3 called for heavy back up close to the beginning of the battle and gave the attacking dravidions a run for their money ~ both sides had suffered casualties but the dravidions were being fought back with relative ease ~ back in the power core room the lights had gone out and the only way of seeing anything was the eerie, pulsing glow of the power core ~ the voice had come from a dravidion, but he clearly wasn’t a soldier from the clothes he was wearing ~ Squads 1 & 4, worried began to back to back away, but before they could get out of the chamber a heavy door slammed shut behind them ~ the dravidion spoke “I am Emperor Regnorok of Dravidia, and you seem to be the human D.D.S team I’ve heard about” ~ the leader of Squad 1 replied “we are, and we are also intent on blowing your ship to smithereens” ~ Regnorok laughed at his comment and barked a single word in dravidion ~ several dravidions stepped out of the shadows, with some nasty looking laser cannons at their sides ~ they took aim at the troops and their fingers tightened on the triggers… ~ meanwhile the battle has spread to the control room of the destroyer, and the dravidions are defending it fiercely ~ Squads 2 & 3 are intent on taking the control room because they know if Squads 1 & 4 don’t manage to blow up the power core, there is a self-destruct mechanism in case of emergency ~ Squad 1 has done their job and defended Squad 4 with their life ~ Squad 4 know its up to them to kill the dravidions and destroy the ship ~ Regnorok laughs evilly and his guards take aim at Squad 4 ~ the laser beams let rip at Squad 4, who duck at the last moment ~ the lasers sail over their heads and destroy the door behind them ~ before the guards have a chance to recharge their weapons Squad 4 is out through the door and running to Squad 2 for help ~ Regnorok sends his guards after them, steps over the lifeless bodies of Squad 1, and heads calmly for escape pods ~ Squad 4 reaches the battle in the control room and requests help from Squad 2 ~ the leaders of Squad 2 & 4 agree its time for them to deploy their secret weapon ~ they contact H.Z.C.F.T and tell them to lock in onto their signal and send the H.A.C.S in, which stands for Heavily Armored Combat Suit, equipped with laser cannons, rocket launchers, sniper rifles and razor blades ~ H.Z.C.F.T agree, lock on to the signal, and teleport the H.A.C.S in ~ the H.A.C.S makes short work of the alien soldiers and launches a missile into the control room, to kill any dravidions inside ~ Squads 2,3 and 4 enter the control room cautiously and begin to think of a way to be able to defend the control room and search for the self-destruct button ~ Emperor Regnorok got to the escape pod bay and began powering up his private escape ship ~ Regnorok’s guards catch up with the D.D.S squads and open fire on the control room ~ the guards are greeted with a mini-missile, which blows 2 of the guards to bits ~ once the smoke and dust has cleared the H.A.C.S charges out at them and begins to fight ~ Squad 2 has discovered the self-destruct button and now that they have the H.A.C.S to escort Squad 4, Squad 4 thinks they can plant the bomb at the power core, and if all else fails, Squad 2 will press the self-destruct button ~ Emperor Regnorok begins the 1 minute countdown for his ship’s takeoff ~ Squad 4 plant the bomb at the power core and set the timer for 1 minute 30 seconds ~ Emperor Regnorok takes off from the destroyer with his best soldiers ~ Squad 4 contact Squads 2 & 3 and tells them to teleport back to earth ~ the D.D.S’s job is done, and as they teleport back to Earth, a huge explosion is heard all over the planet – the destroyer has been obliterated ~ the D.D.S is welcomed home and congratulated ~
No one spotted a small object falling through the atmosphere and crashing in the Amazon rainforest……

thats nearly finished the page! p.s i wrote this song from scratch and its called "Death To The World" AND IT IS COPYRIGHT

The current story im working on The Ryul Empire
Chapter 1
There once was a fighting school who taught people to do sword fighting, unfortunetly not all people were they for good reasons, this is what happened.

In 2389 they was a great fighting school who taught people sword fighting, all guns had been destroyed after a horrible atomic bomb that hit the world, most people survived the blast using special bomb shelters, but 100,000 people died. The people found out aliens were the cause of the strike. So the people decide they should prepare for war so fighting school were set up every where.

They was a child called Miza who wanted to be the greatest earth warrior ever, every day he practised fighting every day of his life. Then the day came when he was accepted to the greatest fighting school in Bitan, which is future Britian.

On his first day he met a few people, a boy called Rixo, Unto, Hijo and a girl called Vivo. As soon as he seen them all he knew they would be friends. He also met another boy called Ejio. Rixo was a broad who didn't have much brains, Unto is a intelligent boy who dose not fight as strong as others, Hijo was a medic at the school who always knew what was needed for someone to recover fast, and Vivo was a red headed girl who had great strengh and a brain to match. Ejio was a mysterious boy who had great power and intelligence

Chapter 2
On his first day of training Mr Deriv discovered a talent in the boy nobody had seen before, he said he had great potential. Mr Deriv, Mrs Hyko, Mr Sevy, Mr Fuj and Mrs Dowel all thought he was the best fighter ever, only Dr Hyvil was not so impressed, nobody knew why.

Later in Miza's room him Rixo, Unto and Hijo were talking about there day."I broke 4 fake bodys and defeated Hkil and Fruj today". said Rixo
"Oh yeah, i broke 7 fake bodys and defeated Jrif, Kojk and Greo". said Unto
"I healed nine people today". said Hijo
"I broke 5 fake bodys and defeated Truj and Ulo". said Miza.
"Not bad for a first day." said Rixo
"I agree". said Unto and Hijo

Chapter 3
The next few weeks were going brilliant for Miza, he got a sword for his 13 birthday, he becaume a level 8 fighter and represented his school in the Bitan nationals. That all was about to change...

Miza entered the major school compotation were the best kids enter a compotation to win the ultimate sword for a trainee. Ejio was the favourite to win.
In the first round Rixo won an easy fight against Kojk, Ejio defeated Truj easily, Vivo defeated Sgtu and Miza defeated Greo. In the second round Rixo was defeated by Ejio and Miza defeated Miza won a close fight against Vivo, in the final Ejio was against Miza, the fight was going fast the boys swords were going really fast, sparks were going everywhere. Suddenley Miza got slashed in the leg and fell to the floor, Ejio thought he was the victor, just then Miza stood up and slashed Ejio in the back, He was the victor. Ejio made a recovery but wasn't going to let this just slide by, he was furios at Miza. He wasn't ever going to forgive...

Chapter 4
No one saw Ejio for 2 weeks, he had dissapeared. Unto said
"Miza, dont give it a second thought, he is propaply just went another strop, thats his style". Everyone else laughed. But this was no laughing matter.

The next week he arriveed back at the school, he was covered in a red liquid, yet, he had no cuts.
"Where have YOU been, we have been worried sick looking for you"! said Mr Deriv
"Mr Deriv he is just a learning child, he will wonnder from time to yime ". said Mr Hyvil.

The next day Ejio asked Miza if he wanted to go for walk, he said yes, but one day, he would regret that decison.

Chapter 4

Miza and Ejio walked into the forest the next day. Ejio had something in his belt that miza couldnt quite see what it was.

Never finding time 2 do but i do try :)

wow torrey that friken amazing p.s heheheh ogling heheheh funny

hehe thx, maddie, i've got to read some of these stories and rate them tonight.

i cant post all my work on this puny page

well then insult my page will you, lol jk

lol this page is full of lies! TAKE THAT METROPAL!!

well then...

*Revives.*

im a writer and ive actually been working on something for like the last 2 months now, i should be done it soon_____i hope, but whenever im done i'll be sure to post alittle part of it on here, because its pretty long actually really long lol

Great! Please do post soon. I'm gonna unearth some of my stuff and post it too.

Darkness. John woke up, but was met by a cold and dark feeling, plus an extreme pain in his right arm. Suddenly the lights flickered on, he realised he was in a warehouse, empty, the only thing there was a few crates and fluroscent lights, 3 of which failed to work. John looked down to meet the pain, and saw a gaping hole in his right arm, bleeding like crazy."Where am I?" he said to himself
"I can't tell you that Johnathon." a quiet voice replied.
"Who are you?" "Why am i bleeding?" "Who did this too me?"
"I did this Johnathon."
"WHAT! Why?"
"You know Johnathon"
John was confused, he ran for the door of the warehouse, but was met by a even stronger stinging pain in his right arm
"AHHHHH, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TOO ME?"
"Not nice having your blood on your arms is it? It's not too bad when it's someone elses, you can just wash it off, but your own just comes back, until your gone."
"What do you mean!" Johnathon shouted, slightly fatigued and worryingly.
"You do know Johnathon, look into your past, when was the last time you had blood on your hands."
A cool shiver of realisation went through John, he was up for the murder of his wife 3 months ago, he was let out due to evidence not being strong enough
"I didn't kill her! You can't prove that!"
"I can Johnathon." said the voice, still keeping the quiet tone
"I was there Johnathon."
"Then why didn't you go to court?"
"I did Johnathon, but i wasn't aloud to talk."
"What does that mean?"
John was filled with questions, but with good reason.
"Who or what are you?"
"That's not important Johnathon, what is important is that you need to find out who you are."
"You know my name, why do you ask."
"Yes i know your name, but your name is not important,all serial killers, psychopaths and rapists had a name, but all other people do too."
"A name is just basic information Johnathon, i need more from you."
As John clenched his arm tighter he realised a pool of blood was appearing to appear below him.
"Im about to die, and im not telling you."
"Well, Johnathon, it seems you will have to find out yourself."
"But i will be dead, so who's the murderer now."
"Oh no Johnathon, you aren't going to die, this is just the beginning.
Wrote this a while back, could probably write better if i put my mind to it.

its really good, i would like to read more of it is there is lol

I think you posted this somewhere else. I like it the suspense and a lot could be put into it.

I lost all my work. :( i wrote something about an orphan who was abandoned. when she was 16 she went on a quest to found out who her parents were. She found her mysterious brother on the way. It was all typed out onmy computer then all my data was deleted and i has tostart over.