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Is My Love not Enough for You

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is my love not enough for you
i try to make to make you happy
you think its more like puppy love
but you've got to realize it's more than that

i try my hardest to figure you out
but nothing makes you happy
i try & i try & i tryto make you mine
but to you I'm like dirt
hear my last cry i love you
hear me please i would do anything

please dont leave me
you dont know how much you mean to me
but you've heard my last & finale cry
i love you
goodbye
well not beeing mean but get over that person dont be after him/or her just ignor athat person and move on he'll be the one hurt and ull feel bigger than him :D trust me i know.
dude just go for another girl grow some balls and dont feel sorry for yourself dude its happened to me more than once
Metropal
Metropal
ModLevel 32
5,891 Posts
Guys, he's just showing off his poem. It's really good.
Metropal
Metropal
ModLevel 32
5,891 Posts
^I killed a forum. :(
Originally posted by Metropal^I killed a forum. :(
LOL. I hate when that happens too.
Lost
Lost
Level 28
3,052 Posts
Gosh, that was beautiful.
Denisa
Denisa
Level 18
829 Posts
Are you a he or a she ?..
Lolah
Lolah
Level 7
233 Posts
I guess, I might be the one, who thinks that its a pointless forum. :I
im a he
Aww. I think it's cute. Bit desperate maybe, but cute.
Metropal
Metropal
ModLevel 32
5,891 Posts
Hah. Exactly this day two years ago, I suppressed a forum into submission for several months.
It's a good poem. Nice rhyme scheme. Maybe posting this certain piece on this particular website isn't the best idea, since there's all lot of hard critics. Just saying.