Of sorrow I am

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Peter the pimp is leaving Gamesbutler.com...So I am writing many stories....Most of them are sad....This one is about a master and his young apprentice, they are stranded on an island by a tempest and the master is struck in the heart with debris...As he lie dying, the master tells his student some words....
Sorrow
Written by Charles Kays(1997- )


"For once In my life I'd love to feel the normal breeze of the rich. To feel love and not lose it. To be carefree
I used to enjoy the pleasure of life. Then I grew up and felt great sorry...Now in my tempest of melancholy sorrow
I lie here. Lifeless, as I stare at the violent storm formed from my tears. My sorrow. I sit there and wonder. Why?
Why do the rich get more rich and recieve all pleasure? Why must we, the poor, get nothing while they sit high atop
their palaces and eat to their hearts content?! WHY DO WE DESERVE THE ILLNESSES!? These questions went unanswered
untill I found one. The rich deserve nothing! The rich soon become corrupt and feel no sympathy for us struggling
but they will surely make sure they go on to live. If they are not sent to the afterlife with my hatred towards them
then I am cursed....But surely, God will understand. I do believe all are good at heart. That humanity is a delicate
balance. We all have to potential to be good and bad and without death, without pain, there can not be happiness...
True happiness comes not from money and power, health and food. But from knowing pain. To know true happiness is to
know the feeling of sorrow...As I lie here on this sandy beach I give this sound advice to you. I have felt sorrow
and I now know how to be happy. As I die here on this shore I will die smiling. Laughing...I have found love. I have
found life. I've struggled to survive and kept on top. I now pass my words to you, my young pupil. Never think you
can be happy in life withought feeling sorrow. Sadness is good and you must live on. Just as I have. Do not fret, I
will always be with you. As I now lay here, dying. I smile and say to you this adivice. And just as I have given it to
you, you must pass it down to your student on your death bed. Never let these words die. You must live, fight! You must
not let the rich get everything. Take life into your own hands. Only God truely controls you and if you must break the
laws of the government to live life to the fullest, do it. If you find sorrow and grief on your way then embrace it.
It will all be worth it in the end. Every man is connected and so, too, are you. We are all in gods heart and in each
others' heart. I will never forget the memories of the life I've had here as I lay to die. Goodbye my friend. Goodbye
world. I leave you with my words and hope they will reach the heart of others. I am happy to go, but sad to leave you,
my friend. But even though that is the case, I will join my maker in the Heavens above...I too, hope you to join us here
and begin to start the true story of your life...In Heaven!...."
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Comment on my story
Lost
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Omg that was long but very good!
Randy
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really tht long charles? but great story!!!!
Metropal
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It a absolutly beautiful story Charles, even though this is my second time reading,lol. Still very warming to the heart.
long, sad, awesome, depressing
Dan
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@AJ007 thats wat she said xD
Lost
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Lol!
kamren
kamren
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big story…. i might not be able to read it (jk)
THAT IS NOT BIG!!!!!!! it is just quite long. if u want a real big story just ask me
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DO NOT! ask him man! He wrote a 18 part story on aliens, zombies, and humans and is currently writing another!!!...But thank you all....I hope to become an artist/writer...I will eventually live up to my promise to peter....Just look at my speech on the Tribute Forum
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayumn...No wonder my sis liked ya
And Silence...That sounded dirty at first lol
now that i think about it... it did didn't it. and its a 16 part story charles
What is this story....?
Lost
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It's what Charles wrote Peter after he left.
great story, but I didn't like the bit about god and heaven.
Hmm....You know, Charles, Alice feels really bad right now....Maybe you should talk to her....
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Oh c'mon Blazer...What's not to like?
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Of sorrow I still am...But my pain is relieved with the help of loved ones.
Intuition tells me to run, but to flee makes me a coward.
I will face my burdens and fears with the help of friends
The maelstrom sorrow rise in vein
We strike it down with good emotions
And let happiness reign.
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A poem I wrote...And if you're 8 and ignorant....Poems don't have to rhyme
Lost
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OK.....
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! to many words
Dan
Dan
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srsly fox? your acting like someones dieing, its oonly some guy leaving a gaming site, bit ott
Ummmm.
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Seriously Dan? Why were you born? Why are you a fu.cking bi.tch?!?!?! HOW DO YOU KNOW I'M NOT JUST RANDOMLY WRITING THINGS HOPING SOMEONE WILL VISIT THE SITE, SEE MY TALENT, AND OFFER ME A JOB!? HUH?! DON'T BE A F.UCKING JACKASS AND LEARN HOW TO ACTUALLY INSULT ME N00B!
Oh noes, why do you let him get to you so much?
Dan
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fox calm down i think u get over exicted with yourself sometimes
Dan
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the answers to your questions fox
1.When mummy loves daddy so much she.... you get the picture
2.i dont think i am, thatgs your opinion
3.poem scouts dont exist
4.i could insult you, but id lose points for it :)
hope that helped
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Shut up
Dan
Dan
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it was u who asked me, just sayin
Lost
Lost
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I kinda am leaning to Dans side. I don't think anyone would some on here and give you a job. But I am leaning with you, Charles, because I really like it and I miss Peter also.
You just said your leaning on both of there sides?
Lost
Lost
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yeah.
Ha, okay.
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Anyways...I'm in America...I don't know about you, Dan, but here in America...We have something you unlucky people in other countries probably don't have....it's a little thing called "freedom"...And, it allows me to do whatever the f.uck I want when I want and to who I want
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Oh also,
LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOY JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENKKKKIIIIIIIIIIIIIINS!
(From Peter, Charles, and Dan)
RULE BRITTANIA!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T FORGET IT WAS BRITAIN THAT MADE AMERICAN FREE WILL POSSIBLE BY CONALISING THE PLACE!!!!!!!!!! DON'T FORGET WITHOUT BRITTANIA, AMERICA WOULD BE A PRIMITIVE LITTLE PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM LEANING SLIGHTLY TO DANS SIDE SIMPLY BECAUSE I AM BRITISH, AND HE IS BRITISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT REMEMBER CHARLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL ALWAYS BE TECHNICALLY ON UR SIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u do know that america asked britain to fight in the Afghan war? not the other way round? also the America-Britain alliance is the strongest alliance in the world, if it broke i don't know what could happen
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Eh forget I said anything.....
Dan
Dan
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i think we would all be happier then