I've always wanted to write a short story, and this was one i thought of, contains mild gore, so grow a pair before reading.

Darkness. John woke up, but was met by a cold and dark feeling, plus an extreme pain in his right arm. Suddenly the lights flickered on, he realised he was in a warehouse, empty, the only thing there was a few crates and fluroscent lights, 3 of which failed to work. John looked down to meet the pain, and saw a gaping hole in his right arm, bleeding like crazy."Where am I?" he said to himself
"I can't tell you that Johnathon." a quiet voice replied.
"Who are you?" "Why am i bleeding?" "Who did this too me?"
"I did this Johnathon."
"WHAT! Why?"
"You know Johnathon"
John was confused, he ran for the door of the warehouse, but was met by a even stronger stinging pain in his right arm
"AHHHHH, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TOO ME?"
"Not nice having your blood on your arms is it? It's not too bad when it's someone elses, you can just wash it off, but your own just comes back, until your gone."
"What do you mean!" Johnathon shouted, slightly fatigued and worryingly.
"You do know Johnathon, look into your past, when was the last time you had blood on your hands."
A cool shiver of realisation went through John, he was up for the murder of his wife 3 months ago, he was let out due to evidence not being strong enough
"I didn't kill her! You can't prove that!"
"I can Johnathon." said the voice, still keeping the quiet tone
"I was there Johnathon."
"Then why didn't you go to court?"
"I did Johnathon, but i wasn't aloud to talk."
"What does that mean?"
John was filled with questions, but with good reason.
"Who or what are you?"
"That's not important Johnathon, what is important is that you need to find out who you are."
"You know my name, why do you ask."
"Yes i know your name, but your name is not important,all serial killers, psychopaths and rapists had a name, but all other people do too."
"A name is just basic information Johnathon, i need more from you."
As John clenched his arm tighter he realised a pool of blood was appearing to appear below him.
"Im about to die, and im not telling you."
"Well, Johnathon, it seems you will have to find out yourself."
"But i will be dead, so who's the murderer now."
"Oh no Johnathon, you aren't going to die, this is just the beginning.

What did you think? Who was the mystery man? What did he mean? Should i make a second one?

Epic! ... and "grow a pair" made me laugh my a.ss off because I had just watched that new Boxxy vid... XD

Super epic.

glad u liked it

I haven't a clue who the murderer is, but definately make a second part.

K, will do